Hi Aurora & all
please feel welcome to do as you feel inclined with the poem.
In truth it is not quite as I (or possibly as any of us indvidually) would write it and is clearly a melange of styles, thoughts, feelings & creative expressions, which was fun to be a part of.
Personally it feels that while our poem is ok, it also affirms why Rumi, Tagore & co did not write collaboratively, I sense, unlike an orchestra, poetry is, at it’s zenith deeply personal expression that, done well resonates with many.
While looking to be devoid of any ego based reaction to what is – I’d probably prefer not to be mentioned – perhaps it can be read as a group poem from multiple contributors (without naming names, although I have no issue at all with other contributors being named, if preferred ). Will accept & respect any decisions made though – as in the eternal invisible, unlimited reality of all – it matters not.
Looking forward to the continuing conversation on all fronts.
Namaste from Oz